落点与水花:当代诗如何叙事  

Falling Point and Controlling Splash:How to Narrate in Contemporary Chinese Poetry

作　　者：路云 Lu Yun(Hunan Institute of Science And Technology)

机构地区：[1]湖南师大文学院

出　　处：《写作》2023年第3期27-33,112,共8页Writing

摘　　要：当代汉语诗人为克服日益平面化的写作问题,把加强叙事作为针对性策略,要求诗人深入混杂的日常生活,直接面对当代人的生存困境。更进一步说,就是要求诗人调整自己的叙述视角,并解决好诗歌语言在叙述过程中的“落点问题”和“水花控制问题”。这个过程不是孤立的,也不是僵硬的,而是一个基于现场的整体性视域,因此叙事的核心技术可归结为:只有在生命的法则之内,才有精确的运动。谭克修等当代诗人的努力已取得一定成效,其诗歌《一只猫带来的周末》表明,一个诗人唯有依赖不断深入的写作活动,才有可能修正自己的叙事观念。In order to overcome the increasingly serious problem of complanation in writing,contemporary Chinese poets strengthen the narrative,which requires themselves to penetrate into daily life and directly face the living dilemma of contemporary people.Furthermore,it requires the poet to adjust his narrative perspective and to solve the problem of“falling point”and“controlling splash”in the narrative process of writing poetry.This process is neither isolated nor stiff,but a integrated perspective based on the scene.Therefore,the core technology of narrative can be attributed to as follows:only within the laws of life can there be accurate exercises.Contemporary poets’hard works have achieved certain results.For example,Tan Kexiu’s poem The Weekend a Cat Brought shows that only through continuous writing activities can a poet revise his narrative concept.

关 键 词：当代诗歌 诗歌叙事 整体性视域 叙述速度 谭克修 

分 类 号：H315[语言文字—英语]