马宝山微型小说点评  

On Ma Baoshan's Mini Novels

作　　者：张伟[1] ZHANG Wei(Editorial Department of the Academic Journal,Baotou Teachers College,Baotou 014030)

机构地区：[1]包头师范学院学报编辑部,内蒙古包头014030

出　　处：《阴山学刊》2019年第2期65-69,共5页Yinshan Academic Journal

摘　　要：马宝山是具有全国影响的微型小说作家,曾获得小小说最高奖金麻雀奖,作品被翻译成多种文字,入选语文教材,或作为中考试题使用。对马宝山的代表作进行点评,助推其经典化。《月亮》做了诗化的艺术处理,"月亮"就是一个意象,有绝句般的隽永。大面积留白,是典型的小小说章法。《尼姑庵》探触到两性关系中的两难境地,禁欲固然悖逆人性,放纵欲望、伦理破界,也是悲剧。《同窗》通篇采用多重对比,有人物性格的横比,有情节上的纵比。从细节处寻绎蛛丝马迹,可读出象征寓意。人物命运的反转,有性格逻辑的必然。《名气》文言、半文言词语的运用,让小说平添了古旧味。作者是美术科班出身,写画家得心应手。《苏先生》写活了人物性格,也就写出了命运。《周庄冉记商号》体现出作者过硬的观察力。小说后半部分的情节,山回路转,柳暗花明。《沈万三与徐先生》难在写出了性格的转变。小说审美也审智,这个"智",首先是作者的智慧,作者又把它赋予笔下的人物。Ma Baoshan is a national-famous mini novel writer,who has won the Golden Sparrow award which is the top prize for mini novel creation.His works have been translated into many languages,selected into Chinese textbook,used in the entrance examination for secondary school.It helps for the canonization of Ma Baoshan’s works that we comment on his masterpiece.“The Moon” has been poeticized.“The moon” is an image and is meaningful like Chinese poetry.But it adopts typical mini-novel writing skills namely leaving blank and space for the readers’ imagination.“Nunnery” touches on the dilemma in the relationship between the sexes.Although abstinence is against human nature,indulging desire and breaking ethical rules lead to tragedy.“Classmates” adopts multiple contrast throughout the novel,there are horizontal comparisons among the characters,as well as the vertical comparisons between the plots.From the details we can read the symbolic meaning.The reversal of the characters’ destiny is logically inevitable.In “Fame”,the use of classical and semi - classical words gives the novel an antique flavor.Having received professional art training,Ma Baoshan is experienced in depicting the painters.In “Mr.Su” he gives life to the characters and writes about the destiny.“Zhouzhuang Ran’s Firm” shows the author’s keen observation.“Shen Wanshan and Mr.Xu” shows the development of personal characters which is extremely difficult.Novels appreciate beauty as well as the wit.The “wit” is primarily the author’s wisdom,and the author gives it to the characters in his novels.

关 键 词：马宝山 微型小说 代表作 审美分析 

分 类 号：I207.427[文学—中国文学]