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出　　处：《考试与招生》2024年第11期29-32,共4页

摘　　要：写作第一节Dear Chris,I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.In order to get inspirotion.I wolked ocross the river,breothed the fresh oir that refreshed me ond listened to zhe birds.After a few hours,I ultimately finished my work,which described a peaceful picture of a girl nuning around the gross.The moment my art teacher sow it,she proised me for the meanings expressed in it.Not only did it show the girl's energy,but it also symbolized the greot harmony between humon and noture.A sense of occomplishment mixea with delight swept over me.

关 键 词：HARMONY finished PEACE 

分 类 号：G62[文化科学—教育学]